Fellow Looking For a Critique

[hausdok]

If anyone is interested, the author of this article is asking folks to proof-read it and wants feedback.

ONE TEAM - ONE FIGHT!!!

Mike

[Marc]

Feedback? I'll give you feedback....find something else to do for a living, other than inspecting and writing.

Marc

[kurt]

Oh Lord.........

[Tom Raymond]

After reading Marc's response I expected it to be as mangled as the flash light description. It was pretty bad, but you can imagine my disappointment.

Tom

[John Ghent]

Which author requested a critique?

[hausdok]

The article was written by Mr. Gromicko and someone names Kate Tarasenko.

OT - OF!!!

M.

[hoosier inspector]

I'm confused, are we supposed to be tasting the house too?

[Marc]

I'll have tabasco on mine.

Marc